Julies Story on Hampshire police officers is first and foremost a great find and goes to show that you can uncover great stories simply by putting in an FOI request, well done Juilie! The graphic that Julie is standing in front of is very good and well put together. However I would criticise that the story does drag on a little bit too long and there are a lot of facts to take it. The script could be slightly shorter so that the facts can be absorbed easier.
Toms story has a good range of opening GV's that are engaging to watch. There is a change in the sound of the voice over though, I assume they were recorded separately, I know it's a bit nit picky but hey that's how a Don thinks! The interview is good and gets a good opinion out however it would be good to get he woman saying how unfair it is and how no one will be able to cope. A very good range of shots which is impressive!
The library oov is again another good local story that I think is suitable for an oov rather than a package.
The strike story is good to follow up on as it firstly gives a good story with not much work needed to revisit. Also it shows our viewer that we are keeping up to date with the story and that
The sports team excelled once again with a big and diverse range of sport to offer for both he bulletin and sports week. It is good to know that if needs be the news team can come to us to fill up the bulletin if stories have been dropped for any reason.
Sam and Henry did really well with their Boxing and Dodgeball features that were fun and interesting to watch and it shows they weren't afraid to experiment with and enjoy making their features.
I was once again on Ice Hockey once again at the home of the mighty Bison, who are still experiencing some unsteady form. I managed to overcome my problem of getting my white balance right for this game. The problem being the lighting changes from the warm up to the start of the game, and the camera takes a while to adjust to the change of light, this time I left it alone and I think it paid off. The game was exciting once again, and as the weeks go on I am getting more confident with my filming, and am attempting to get closer when I think there is a chance. There is always the possibility of loosing the puck when going in close, but I feel I am beginning to read the game better and am able anticipate when I need to zoom in on the action. With nine goals in the game it was going to be again full of action, I left the goals a little bit longer by including more of the build up play as I think the previous week it was a bit too fast paced. This also meant that the goals don't look too similar as they can do on a small playing ice rink. The pitch and tone of my voice was good again I think, but it still needs improvement possibly getting more animated when recording the voice over could help. I had a problem with the focus, I think it must have been set on auto focus as when I moved the camera quickly it would go out of focus and sometimes focus in on the railings when they got in shot. I need to check the settings more carefully to make sure this doesn't happen again. The sound recording was better also as I turned down the sound on the recording so it wasn't too loud. For next week I will try to improve my voice over to make it more enthusiastic and I think that will improve my package.
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