WINOL a good show once again with some very interesting stories.
The pick of the bunch being the Steve Brine interview by Julie, my personal opinion anyway. The Brine interview made the show look very professional with a MP talking about his 'rebellion,' great stuff! One criticism I would have is the headline strap said ' he's a rebel' and in the clip of Brine talking he says ' I don't see myself as a rebel '. Brine gives his opinion on Europe; saying it's bad and the facts are in Julie's voice; talking about the MP's voting on Europe. Good work Julie on getting the interview in the first place outside parliament, It can't have been easy.
The Farage interview is good, the story of question time coming to winchester is not package worthy but it's good that we have followed the story and spoke to Farage linking it with the European referendum. He says some interesting things 'it's a disaster for the north and south of Europe' very good!
The occupy Bournemouth story is good as it's a global issue on a local scale. The shots of the sign with lots of writing on it was a bit confusing however the shots of the protestors painting the signs were good as we actually see people doing things. The interviewee's were good and added a personal feel to it. Also the update is a good idea and worked well, however I think that although it is obvious Ali is reading it would look better if the paper was actually in the shot to make it really obvious for the battery chickens as chris would put it.
The Rubbish story lacks a variety of shots for me. There are only a few bins outside a house and some big red ones. I think that if the rubbish situation is so bad we need to see laods of bins over flowing and if possible more than one house on a street with uncollected rubbish. However the base of the story is good, the facts in Lee's voice and the resident saying how bad it is. George Beckett apolagising is priceless! to get a councillor saying sorry is great and it doesn't happen every day!
The Laser story is interesting, and explained well without being too technical so that everyone can understand it. Would have been good to see Tom suited and booted but the story is good and the interview, however I think that the interviewee is facing too far away from the camera. It looks good when the person your interviwing is at a slight angle but I think he is facing too far away.
Well presented by keegan and Champion very natural and calm.
SPORTS good stuff once again; a lot of footage and some interesting cup ties! The non league teams progressing that far is great for their fans and draw in much more viewers than our normal league matches (or at least it should do). I think that the sport is possibly a bit too long for the bulletin, and believe me from an aspiring sports journalist this pains me to say it! But realistically I can see how people tuning in for news would get bored of watching premiership football let alone blue square south football and Ice Hockey! As mentioned in the de-brief the winol woodwork is probably too long. A short clip and a advertisement to sportsweek would have been better.
BASINGSTOKE BISON. A decent game with seven goals making it much easier to make interesting that the 1-0 fiasco I had the week before! I Was happy with the over all package and am continuing to try and improve my voice however I feel that it was maybe lacking a little bit. I want to get the variation in my voice that is interesting for the viewer to listen to. I also left slightly more in the build up play to show the viewers more of the game. Also I think this would make it less confusing to what is going on and what the score is! I had toyed with the idea of using a goal counter in the corner so that the viewer doesn't get confused. The reason I haven't is that I think it could look a bit tacky but may experiment with it in the future! I had a slight problem with the sound leading up to the last goal as I tried to blend it in with the last clip but it didn't work as well as I had hoped and there was a slight jump in the volume. I don't think it was that obvious but I noticed and I was not happy with it.
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